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Hypnotic Melody

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A shuriken went flying through the air and embedded itself in a tree, just missing the head of its intended target.


“Damn…!” A red headed female who wore a hat atop her head cursed in anger, as that one nearly had her if she had been a split second slower just now. She turned and glared at the person who had thrown the weapon at her who had another one drawn back ready to throw and launched it.


Thinking quickly she pulled out a senbon needle and threw it at it, the two metal items collided with one another and knocked the other down from the impact.


Tayuya dashed going left as she moved. She shifted her head and spotted the person she was against running as well against her keeping her in sight so not to lose track of her.


The person had her hair in buns and was wearing a white long sleeved shirt and brown pants she had scrolls on her person that she would use to summon a multiple arsenal of weapons that she could use.


“You’re not escaping.” TenTen said determined to get her as she ran after Tayuya, having encountered her and knowing that she was an enemy and she needed to be taken down and captured for any possible information.


Tayuya ran looking on at her and threw down spikes to dislodge her, TenTen saw them and leapt over them avoiding them as she continued to pursue The Oto Kunoichi.


TenTen revealed chakra strings on her hands and attached to them multiple kunai and threw them at Tayuya who avoided them. “Eat this!” She said and flipped around and blew on the flute that she had and produced a sonic boom firing it right at TenTen.


“Whoa!” TenTen shouted as she saw it and moved out of the way and it hit and destroyed part of a tree.


She did hand symbols and performed one of her techniques.


TenTen looked and saw the ground beneath her starting to give way and start to engulf and swallow her.


“Oh no you don’t!” TenTen exclaimed and focusing broke the Genjutsu before it could take effect on her, all her time she spent training enable her to know that Genjutsu was Taijutsu’s counterpart and had become adapt at breaking free of them.


Tayuya scowled and cursed under her breath, she hadn’t expected her to be able to counter her Genjutsu like that, but she had more than one trick up her sleeves she could use.


TenTen reached behind her and pulled out a pair of long daggers, the sixteen year old shinobi twirling them expertly in her hands as they was one of the many weapons she wielded and used. She had heard about this ninja’s ability and techniques she had used in battle, but if she could close the distance and fight her up close, she could win and subdue her.


She charged at Tayuya her daggers swinging through the air at her, Tayuya dodged them and backed away and threw kunai at her which TenTen deflected with them and attacked again. Tayuya expertly dodged it and launched her foot out catching TenTen in the stomach staggering her backwards


Tayuya suddenly whipped out a small round ball.


“Surprise!” Tayuya shouted and threw it down and clouds of smoke covered the area blocking TenTen’s vision and sight.


“Where’d she go?!” TenTen shouted looking around for her bringing the daggers up, trying to find her and keep her guard up if she planned any sneak attacks on her just now as Tayuya had disappeared.


Unknown to TenTen, Tayuya was in a hiding spot above in a tree a smile on her face as the seventeen old ninja looked on spying on her.


She could make her getaway, she would never expect or know she had until it was too late, but Tayuya wasn’t done yet. She wanted to have more fun with the bun haired female. The girl interested her and she wanted to be entertained by her.


“And I know just how to do it.” The redhead said as she knew the perfect Jutsu she had for this, one that would put TenTen under her control once she used it on her.


“You’re all mine now.” Tayuya said with a wicked grin and brought her flute up to her lips and blew into it as she began to play it, sending it towards the unsuspecting TenTen who was unprepared for it and what was about to happen. Physically she was more than a match for Tayuya, but how could she handle that which affects the mind as music began to fill the air.


“Huh?” TenTen said in confusion as she heard the music and shifted her head about trying to find the source of it. “Where are you?” She called out bringing her hands up all her senses on edge.


Tayuya in her hiding spot continued to play her flute her fingers moving across it as it picked up volume and grew louder. TenTen looked on trying to figure out where the noise was coming from. Her eyes darting around to find the source of where the music was coming from. She brought her hands up over to her ears to cover them in an attempt to block it out.


Tayuya looking on smirked as she could see it was starting to have an effect on her. She shifted tone and began playing a soft pleasant melody which was different from the one she had been playing as her fingers expertly moved.


“What’s going on?” TenTen said as she felt light headed all of a sudden and brought a hand up to her forehead and shook her head to try and regain her senses from what was happening just now. She was feeling more and more dizzy with each passing second despite her efforts to clear her head.


The music, she knew she shouldn’t be listening to it, but it was so soft and pleasant sounding, that her hands were removed from her ears.


She couldn’t make sense of what was going on as something seemed off with her body just now that she couldn’t explain. The muscles in her body were going against her mind as they started to relax on their own from the music


Looking on, Tayuya knew that she almost had her as the music was taking an effect on here and her body was going against her will as the melody played and echoed all around the confused ninja.


The bun haired girls’ hands fell to her side, dropping there motionlessly as they hanged by her waist as she no longer had them in a fighting stance.


TenTen stood there, a far off look in her eyes as she stood there her shoulders slouched over after what had happened, The Leaf Kunoichi not saying or doing anything as she stood there like a statue. She blinked faintly as something was coming over her just now and she couldn’t make any sense of it.


Tayuya shifted tones again playing a piercing noise like that of a ringing bell that rang all around TenTen who stood there listening to Tayuya’s song that she was playing on it.


After a while, Tayuya had finished playing and looked on and saw TenTen standing there motionlessly, her feet nailed to the ground seemingly after what had just happened now.


Grinning, Tayuya put away her flute and emerging from her hiding spot walked over to TenTen and stood in front of her and checked her. TenTen stood there like a doll her arms to her side as the person she had been pursuing was in front of her but she didn’t do anything against her now.


“You won’t be needing those anymore, my little pet” Tayuya said and removed the daggers TenTen held as well as her scrolls as she discarded them from her belt. “You’ll be having a different damn job from now on with me.” She told her as she removed them all from TenTen one by one.


“There we go, that‘s all of it.” She proclaimed after having removed them for her. She reached up and touched TenTen’s face with her hand a smile on her face as she stared into her eyes.


She looked on at TenTen who was helpless before her, unable to do anything as what she had done was by using her flute had hypnotized TenTen with her music, the hypnotic melody she had played had entranced and brainwashed her putting her under her control as she was unable to resist it.


Smirking, Tayuya grabbed her and leaning over kissed her deeply causing TenTen to gasp in surprise but didn’t try to struggle or resist against it.


Tayuya pulled away grinning as she looked on as TenTen hadn’t struggled against her just now, she was completely under her control.


“Are you going to do everything your Mistress commands?” She asked with an enticing tone of voice to her as she looked over TenTen‘s form.


“Yes Mistress,” TenTen replied obediently with a smile all thoughts now towards pleasing Tayuya.


“We’re going to have lots of fun.” Tayuya said with a devious smile and let out a laugh as she began forming a hand symbol and disappeared with TenTen in a poof of smoke as she took her.


Sometime later, Tayuya is seen in a room and seated on a chair her legs crossed as she had her flute up and was playing it, the sound of the melody filling the room as she expertly played it as music echoed in the room. The redheaded ninja masterfully playing her instrument her fingers expertly moving across it.


Tayuya was not alone in the room however, as someone was there with her in it as she played her instrument.


TenTen is seen in the room dancing to the tune of Tayuya’s flute, her hair buns had been undone and was braided and her outfit and hitai-ate had been discarded and removed as Tayuya had dressed her up in a pink harem outfit with heeled shoes wearing an outfit that she was dancing in. The outfit showed off her bare belly and arms and legs leaving little to the imagination as much of her skin was exposed as she also had jewelry and bracelets on her arms as she danced.


TenTen danced and swayed her hips as Tayuya continued to play her flute as she was dancing for her entertainment, the redhead looking on as the hypnotized Kunoichi moved with grace around the room.


Tayuya stopped playing her music after a few minutes and motioned for TenTen to come over to her which she did stepping towards her as she stood before Tayuya dutifully.


“Does my dancing please you mistress?” TenTen said to her an obedient smile on her face as she looked on.


“Yes it does,” Tayuya replied with a grin to her as she ran her hands across TenTen’s skin. “You’re doing a wonderful job and I’ll be sure to reward you later.” She said as she rubbed her back playfully fiddling with the strings on her shoulder straps. “You love doing what your mistress commands don’t you?”


“Yes Mistress Tayuya.” TenTen replied to her and Tayuya kissed her playfully and squeezed her ass through the undergarment she had on as she had many more ideas of how she could amuse herself with the entranced Leaf Kunoichi who was under her control.


“Good girl, now continue for me TenTen.” She ordered her and TenTen walked forward to the center of the room.


Tayuya brought her flute up and began to play music as TenTen resumed her dance for her Mistress

Point Commission done for WielderofBlueFlames who wanted a story with Tayuya and TenTen

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
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Lord2's avatar
This is an excellent mind control fic and I greatly enjoyed it. I do feel that Tenten's mental struggle could have lasted a bit longer. It seems like she fell under Tayuya's control with too little in the way of a fight.

Tenten and Tayuya are an unusual pairing, but not an unwelcome one. It might be nice to do a fic between Temari and Tenten, or maybe a sequel where Tayuya mind controls Temari as well.